Am i ready to pass

(( sorry if this is sorta good ))

Seamus looked at the sky and smirked like usual. " Dad do you even care about me at all ? " Seamus sat and felt sad he thought Demigods have been claimed but i havent. Seamus sat at long island sound like usual to here stuff from his dad. He have been at camp forever and still havent been claimed. I shall be claimed soon but my dad is taken his time and he has too much on his mind. Seamus looked at all the kids who have been claimed but he knew he will be claimed but not today maybe he might who knows everday is a new thing. Seamus sat and looked in tears his friends have been claimed but he hasnt.

quotation marks and parenthesis spacing. and please, for the love of god, stick with one color when your speaking!

ok ill make another one

if you could keep it in one topic, please? just post it in this topic, instead of making multiple topics trying to improve.