Am i ready to pass

(( Here you go peeps enjoy))

Seamus looked he just laughed when he saw Alexender and Eliza break up and started saying " Hopelss always fighting cant i have friends who can get along with each other so annoying. " Seamus looked at the Hephsteaus kids they were sweating. Seamus had his armor on and sword. Seamus was hopping to play capture the flag. Seamus looked at the Apollo's kids playing basketball.He thought Man there good Seamus looked at the Armory it was always cool to look at but just was hot in there.Seamus looked at the ground it was soaked.Seamus looked at his sword it showed his relfection and he smiled and he felt so happy.Seamus walked to the Mess Hall.

ok, I'm going to try the tough love approach, becuase telling you nicely quite obviously isn't getting it through your head.

Grammar! Please check it! and punctuate your sentences for the love of every god on Olympus!