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Percy Jackson RPG

This is a Role-Play based off of the popular Percy Jackson Series. You can be canons, mortals, almost anything you can think of.
 
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Seamus Dellas
Unclaimed Demigod
Seamus Dellas


Posts : 101
Join date : 2012-04-21
Age : 26
Location : Camp Half Blood

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PostSubject: pass school   pass school Icon_minitimeSat Jun 02, 2012 11:19 pm

(( Heres another shot wish me luck))

Seamus was very angry at his friends they always were so mean to him in ways he couldn't think of.Seamus hopped he be able to punch out his friends but he never would.Seamus wasnt ever good at stuff he tried to be the best but never could.Seamus had always been bullied because of his ADHD he been bullied by the Ares kids. Will Eliza ever date him. " What am i think she hates me too much." Seamus was angry at Alex for breaking Eliza heart. " Daughter of Morpheaus so dumb." Seamus hated his friends so much he wished he could just hate them. Seamus left the mess hall back to his cabin.
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Micah Remington




Posts : 34
Join date : 2012-05-31
Age : 27

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PostSubject: Re: pass school   pass school Icon_minitimeSun Jun 03, 2012 12:06 am

Hey there ^_^ I've been reading your posts in the rp school, and there definitely is improvement in your grammar, though it still lacks a bit.

Just a tip, instead of using 'Seamus' at the start of every sentence try using: he, the boy, the teenager e.t.c. It makes the post more enjoyable to read.
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