Roleplaying

Seamus was walking down the streets of Manhattan he kept his head up for monsters like usual when he ends up getting attacked by monsters. Seamus looked around the streets for a store. He kept on walking it was about 5:00 pm at night. " What a day in New York Adam?" he thought to himself . He didn't really think much about monsters till is started getting attack by them at age 8. Well on the 600th floor of the Empire State Building stood Olympus with the gods upthere. " Seamus wait up let me catch up?" yelled his brother Adam. "Why Adam do i wait for you Adam?" asked Seamus. Seamus and Adam walked down the street. Then a glowing figure appeared it was a ghost. "Hello young demigods i am Anna See." The two boys looked at each other with wonder.

Seamus and Adam froze they never saw this women before. " Adam what do we do now i mean right now?" Seamus looked at Adam with fear. " Seamus we run i think. now " The two boys darted down the street like a lighting bolt coming out of the sky. " You boys will never escape me." yelled Anna See " Adam get your sword out now!" Seamus got his sword out of his pocket and was ready for battle then Adam got his sword out to fight. Then the boys fought so much Anna See was too powerful for a city to beat her the boys passed out. Then landed at Camp Half Blood.

Punctuation and spelling again. can you get on Microsoft Word?

yes i can

the five word rule, man. try typing your RP's in word. that should help with some of the bigger stuff.

what the five word rule

do i have to write it all over

The Five Word Rule is where you should post at least five words when in OOC. and no, you don't HAVE to. at any rate, you just need work. keep up the practicing.

did i do that i just edit it

no, don't just edit the post, as it would make it a hassle. post it again, instead, just make sure to fix any mistakes made that you can find.

so i didnt pass this school

It takes more than a single day to Pass RP school. and better grammar in OOC is also appreciable, though it's not as likely to get cracked down on.

so i this will be years

thomas grammer is my least good topic well one of them i am horible in grammer

I see. if you could try consulting an english teacher, I have no clue how to teach.

i am in 5th grade and my teacher is my grammer teacher listen just pass me it take years to learn better grammer

It does take years to learn perfect grammar, but we don't expect perfect grammar, we are doing this so you become a better RPer, and 2 things of learning aren't bad at all, in fact, I bet the teacher doesn't teach RPing. It won't take but a few weeks to pass this, I'm not a teacher of this or anything, but it won't take years, I can promise you that

It'd also help if you actually read out loud what you typed after you finish. If it doesn't sound right then retype it.