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Seamus Dellas Unclaimed Demigod
Posts : 101 Join date : 2012-04-21 Age : 26 Location : Camp Half Blood
| Subject: my mood today Wed May 02, 2012 7:24 am | |
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Thomas Kirtley Son of Athena
Posts : 1230 Join date : 2012-04-11 Age : 31 Location : I just lost my internet home :'(
| Subject: Re: my mood today Wed May 02, 2012 7:31 am | |
| Length, Punctuation, and capitalization at the beggining of sentences. I suggest typing with Word to help you with that. | |
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James Smith Son of Athena
Posts : 25 Join date : 2012-04-28 Age : 29 Location : Roverado in Piano, Italy
| Subject: Re: my mood today Wed May 02, 2012 7:32 am | |
| I'd suggest paying attention in English class. | |
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Seamus Dellas Unclaimed Demigod
Posts : 101 Join date : 2012-04-21 Age : 26 Location : Camp Half Blood
| Subject: Re: my mood today Wed May 02, 2012 7:35 am | |
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Thomas Kirtley Son of Athena
Posts : 1230 Join date : 2012-04-11 Age : 31 Location : I just lost my internet home :'(
| Subject: Re: my mood today Wed May 02, 2012 7:35 am | |
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Aeolus Minor God
Posts : 127 Join date : 2012-04-30 Age : 24 Location : Classified.
| Subject: Re: my mood today Wed May 02, 2012 7:38 am | |
| At fifth grade you should still be able to compose a sentence easily. It's a matter of effort, really. | |
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Artemis Olympian
Posts : 613 Join date : 2012-04-29 Age : 23 Location : Do you even need to ask? The moon of course!
| Subject: Re: my mood today Wed May 02, 2012 7:38 am | |
| Bwaha you guys. I've still yet to turn my RP sample thing in.
Sorry Seamus, but my writing had at least capitilization in fifth. Except now we're doing fourth grade stuff... some people in my class are idiots.
I didn't just spam or anything...
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Evie Nightingale Daughter of Hecate
Posts : 404 Join date : 2010-05-08 Age : 28 Location : camp halfblood
| Subject: Re: my mood today Wed May 02, 2012 7:39 am | |
| Can someone clarify to the none American folk (mainly me!) what age fith grade is? | |
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Artemis Olympian
Posts : 613 Join date : 2012-04-29 Age : 23 Location : Do you even need to ask? The moon of course!
| Subject: Re: my mood today Wed May 02, 2012 7:40 am | |
| Evie, it's ten to eleven.
Twelve for the win! | |
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Aeolus Minor God
Posts : 127 Join date : 2012-04-30 Age : 24 Location : Classified.
| Subject: Re: my mood today Wed May 02, 2012 7:41 am | |
| My sister skipped a grade this year and she's 10, so I'd say 10-11 years old. | |
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Evie Nightingale Daughter of Hecate
Posts : 404 Join date : 2010-05-08 Age : 28 Location : camp halfblood
| Subject: Re: my mood today Wed May 02, 2012 7:43 am | |
| Right...
My sister is ten. She can't do a hell of a lot of things, and she isn't all that bright. But she can construct decent sentences and use proper punctuation and stuff... she just blags a lot.. | |
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Alexander Jones Son of Baubos
Posts : 424 Join date : 2010-05-16 Age : 28 Location : Camp Half-Blood
| Subject: Re: my mood today Wed May 02, 2012 7:54 am | |
| At 5th grade I was in 2nd place in the Geography bee, and made short stories that always got A+ | |
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Evie Nightingale Daughter of Hecate
Posts : 404 Join date : 2010-05-08 Age : 28 Location : camp halfblood
| Subject: Re: my mood today Wed May 02, 2012 7:59 am | |
| And thats the limit...
Alex, not everyone is you. Not everyone gets A+'s, some people struggle.
This was set up to help, not to make people feel worse about themselves.
Seamus, I apologise for the cruelty of my last post. I shouldn't have compared you to my sister. You are your own person, and not anyone else.
We'll try to help as much as we can m'kay.
So, why don't you write an RP post and post it in here.... And we'll fix it up so you get a general idea of what you need to fix and improve on. | |
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James Smith Son of Athena
Posts : 25 Join date : 2012-04-28 Age : 29 Location : Roverado in Piano, Italy
| Subject: Re: my mood today Wed May 02, 2012 8:13 am | |
| My advice still stands, he's still in school so actually paying attention in English class will only improve his Role Playing.
I may be blunt but I'm not gonna apologize for it. | |
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Evie Nightingale Daughter of Hecate
Posts : 404 Join date : 2010-05-08 Age : 28 Location : camp halfblood
| Subject: Re: my mood today Wed May 02, 2012 8:18 am | |
| 'S fine, James. I can't force you to apologise. ((technically could... if I eidted your post and stuff))
And you are kinda right, English class does help, a lot.
Just...enough with the comparrisons... | |
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Seamus Dellas Unclaimed Demigod
Posts : 101 Join date : 2012-04-21 Age : 26 Location : Camp Half Blood
| Subject: Re: my mood today Wed May 02, 2012 8:19 am | |
| fine i will do this this better l | |
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Alexander Jones Son of Baubos
Posts : 424 Join date : 2010-05-16 Age : 28 Location : Camp Half-Blood
| Subject: Re: my mood today Wed May 02, 2012 8:20 am | |
| We believe in you Seamus, remember that. LOL XD | |
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